Is it wrong to fight?
I think fighting has a lot of different reasons to be good and bad that's why I chose to write on both sides of the subject for example:
Fighting has to do with many different things like you could be fighting in a sport like boxing or taekwondo but these sports have rules so it is easier to control, also people train and learn how to take punches and kick. Fighting is also good if you are debating for your point of view or side of the argument. If someone tries to attack you-you could fight back for self-defence for example you could be fighting for your life and many other reasons.
Fighting is also very bad for many reasons like dog fighting. dog fighting is animal abuse and cruelty to animals. Dog fighting is where some people steal and capture dogs and make them fight. In Romania people used to train dogs to fight to the death bye making them fight and rip each other apart. People trained the dogs by stealing other dogs to train on. They put a harness or tape around their mouth so the practice dog cannot injure the fighting dog. The fighting dog kills the practice dog so it can get used to fighting another dog. They do this to get money and for human entertainment. Fighting is also bad because you could be bullying in the playground and fighting with other kids. Fighting can hurt people's feelings by making them scared and nervous around strangers.
That is why I think fighting is bad, but it can be good in some ways but not as much as bad ways.
Hi Mia, ka mau te wehi (awesome)! I am impressed with your ability to think on both sides of an argument. You have some good ideas in this piece of writing. Dog fighting sounds horrific! Next time you could write a paragraph for each of your ideas such as a paragraph for dog fighting then a new paragraph on playground fighting etc. Keep up the great writing. Love Mum
ReplyDeletethank you for you nice comment mum
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