Thursday, 23 March 2017

THE DEVILISH ANGEL! BY SAMMI AND MIA

THE DEVILISH ANGEL
The last thing I saw was my alarm clock flashing 12:07 before she pushed her long rotting nails through my chest, her other hand muffling my screams. I sat bolt upright, relieved it was only a dream, but as I saw my alarm clock it read 12:06 and I heard my closet door creak open. Soon enough the clock striked 12:07 and the door opened almost completely and standing there was a shadowy figure almost like an angel but with a devilish and heartless smile. She glared at me with cold, snake like eyes. As she limped into my room she dragged a dead body. I screamed in horror as I realised who it was, My brother was staring back blankly at me with blood streaming out of his eyes and mouth.

The intimidating figure stood over me glaring at me with the devilish smile whispering “ Goodnight, Lochie, or should I say GOOD BYE!” I live alone so I reached for my phone to ring my girlfriend Ashley but the witch like creature grabbed my hand with her long bony fingers and she heaved my arm away from the phone and she let out an ear piercing scream. She leaned closer and I could feel her cold breath on my face so I run down stairs straight to my basement to escape through my underground tunnels “Oh wait I forgot to dig them!” I rush back up the stairs but blocking them is the creature again staring at me with those cold white snake like eyes . There are windows on the wall by the stairs I try and open it and it works and surprisingly the creature abandoned trying to stop me so I quickly jumped out and made my way to Ashley's place which is only a few blocks away.

As I run down the street I didn’t look behind me, which was a mistake. The witch was right behind me the whole time following my every move. I was in Ashley’s bed- room discussing what had happened. Half way through the story I glanced out the window and what I saw was terrifying, the witch like creature was pacing along Ashley's front yard I tried to warn Ashley what was happening, but she didn’t seem interested and just wanted to get back to bed. Suddenly the creature disappeared from the yard, unaware that the creature was standing directly behind us. I turned around to warn Ashley but I turned around just in time to see the devilish creature suck herself into Ashley. I tried to run away but Ashley grabbed me round the neck stopping me from going but also stopping me from breathing. And at that moment Ashley pulled out a steak knife and slit my neck. Deeper and deeper the knife went until it was too late… Lochie was gone.

Still to this day police still don't know who or what had killed Lochie and Ashley and what still scares them is that the devilish Angel is still out there. An evil cackle filled the house that night. Still to this day police and detectives don’t know who or what killed those two innocent people and what still worries them is that the DEVILISH ANGEL is still out there and may be planning her next murder…
To be continued

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