Kia Ora Mia. Thanks for sharing your writing although the formatting of it is hard to read. Come and see me and I will show you how to fix it! Miss H :-)
Kia Ora Miss H, I have just noticed that my formatting was a bit weird, so I have put my writing into a google drawing and updated it so it should look normal now. Thanks for the comment! Mia
Kia ora. I am Deaveaon from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked your speech about the chewing gum. I learnt that the teachers don ́t like us having gum at school. Maybe you could help nigel if people keeps chewing gum, by scrapping the chewing gum to make things faster. Please visit my blog here
I totally agree chewing gum should not be allowed at school. Imagine the wrappers lying around the school and the chewing gum stuck everywhere. Poor Nigel.
Your writing is amazing! I like you have added lots of detail and reasons on why you think chewing gum shouldn't be allowed at school. This reminds me of my argument I am writing.
Hi Mia, I also agree that chewing gum should not be allowed in schools. You have presented some very good arguments here. One other problem that I would have with it is I find the sound of people chewing gum to be rather annoying so would not like to listen to that noise amplified by 28 children all day!
Kia Ora Mia.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing although the formatting of it is hard to read. Come and see me and I will show you how to fix it!
Miss H :-)
Kia Ora Miss H,
DeleteI have just noticed that my formatting was a bit weird, so I have put my writing into a google drawing and updated it so it should look normal now.
Thanks for the comment!
Mia
Kia ora. I am Deaveaon from Gisborne Intermediate School.
DeleteI really liked your speech about the chewing gum.
I learnt that the teachers don ́t like us having gum at school.
Maybe you could help nigel if people keeps chewing gum, by scrapping the chewing gum to make things faster.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Deaveaon.
That looks heaps better! Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mia!
ReplyDeleteKatelynn here from next door!
I totally agree chewing gum should not be allowed at school. Imagine the wrappers lying around the school and the chewing gum stuck everywhere. Poor Nigel.
Your writing is amazing! I like you have added lots of detail and reasons on why you think chewing gum shouldn't be allowed at school. This reminds me of my argument I am writing.
Keep up the great work Mia!
Katelynn
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Hi Mia, I also agree that chewing gum should not be allowed in schools. You have presented some very good arguments here. One other problem that I would have with it is I find the sound of people chewing gum to be rather annoying so would not like to listen to that noise amplified by 28 children all day!
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