We have been working on descriptive writing. Mrs Dellaway shared a spooky video with us to give us inspiration.
Here is my paragraph below.
The last thing I saw was my alarm clock flashing 12:07 before she pushed her long rotting nails through my chest, her other hand muffling my screams. I sat bolt upright, relieved it was only a dream, but as I saw my alarm clock it read 12:06 and I heard my closet door creak open. Soon enough the clock struck 12:07 and the door opened almost completely and standing there was a shadowy figure almost like an angel but with a devilish and heartless smile. She glared at me with cold, snake like eyes putting a shiver down my spine and shadowing me with fear and horror....
Hi Mia, Sammi here.
ReplyDeleteWe wrote that in Room 6, it was so much fun. Its cool that you are still using it!